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 ## Arm Treasure Data and Mbed OS
 
-Treasure Data enterprise customer data platform (CDP) brings all your enterprise data together for a single, actionable view of your customer. We've been working on integrating Mbed OS with Treasure Data:
+We've been working on integrating Mbed OS with Treasure Data, a customer data platform (CDP) that brings all your enterprise data together for a single, actionable view of your customer:
 
 * [Data integration from Mbed OS (HTTP over Wi-Fi)](https://support.treasuredata.com/hc/en-us/articles/360012567313).
 * [Data ingestion from embedded applications](https://support.treasuredata.com/hc/en-us/articles/360000691168).