bd: Copy edit BlockDevices

Amanda Butler · geky · commit e6949db802a3 · 2018-01-29T18:45:36.000-06:00
Copy edit SlicingBlockDevice.h
Copy edit ReadOnlyBlockDevice.h
Copy edit ProfilingBlockDevice.h
Copy edit ObservingBlockDevice.h
Copy edit MBRBlockDevice.h
Copy edit ExhaustibleBlockDevice.h
Copy edit ChainingBlockDevice.h
Copy edit BlockDevice.h

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diff --git a/features/filesystem/bd/BlockDevice.h b/features/filesystem/bd/BlockDevice.h
@@ -139,11 +139,11 @@ class BlockDevice
     /** Get the value of storage when erased
      *
      *  If get_erase_value returns a non-negative byte value, the underlying
-     *  storage will be set to that value when erased, and storage containing
+     *  storage is set to that value when erased, and storage containing
      *  that value can be programmed without another erase.
      *
-     *  @return         The value of storage when erased, or -1 if the value of
-     *                  erased storage can't be relied on
+     *  @return         The value of storage when erased, or -1 if you can't
+     *                  rely on the value of erased storage
      */
     virtual int get_erase_value() const
     {
diff --git a/features/filesystem/bd/ChainingBlockDevice.h b/features/filesystem/bd/ChainingBlockDevice.h
@@ -139,11 +139,11 @@ class ChainingBlockDevice : public BlockDevice
     /** Get the value of storage when erased
      *
      *  If get_erase_value returns a non-negative byte value, the underlying
-     *  storage will be set to that value when erased, and storage containing
+     *  storage is set to that value when erased, and storage containing
      *  that value can be programmed without another erase.
      *
-     *  @return         The value of storage when erased, or -1 if the value of
-     *                  erased storage can't be relied on
+     *  @return         The value of storage when erased, or -1 if you can't
+     *                  rely on the value of erased storage
      */
     virtual int get_erase_value() const;
 
diff --git a/features/filesystem/bd/ExhaustibleBlockDevice.h b/features/filesystem/bd/ExhaustibleBlockDevice.h
@@ -122,11 +122,11 @@ class ExhaustibleBlockDevice : public BlockDevice
     /** Get the value of storage when erased
      *
      *  If get_erase_value returns a non-negative byte value, the underlying
-     *  storage will be set to that value when erased, and storage containing
+     *  storage is set to that value when erased, and storage containing
      *  that value can be programmed without another erase.
      *
-     *  @return         The value of storage when erased, or -1 if the value of
-     *                  erased storage can't be relied on
+     *  @return         The value of storage when erased, or -1 if you can't
+     *                  rely on the value of erased storage
      */
     virtual int get_erase_value() const;
 
diff --git a/features/filesystem/bd/MBRBlockDevice.h b/features/filesystem/bd/MBRBlockDevice.h
@@ -193,11 +193,11 @@ class MBRBlockDevice : public BlockDevice
     /** Get the value of storage when erased
      *
      *  If get_erase_value returns a non-negative byte value, the underlying
-     *  storage will be set to that value when erased, and storage containing
+     *  storage is set to that value when erased, and storage containing
      *  that value can be programmed without another erase.
      *
-     *  @return         The value of storage when erased, or -1 if the value of
-     *                  erased storage can't be relied on
+     *  @return         The value of storage when erased, or -1 if you can't
+     *                  rely on the value of erased storage
      */
     virtual int get_erase_value() const;
 
diff --git a/features/filesystem/bd/ObservingBlockDevice.h b/features/filesystem/bd/ObservingBlockDevice.h
@@ -108,11 +108,11 @@ class ObservingBlockDevice : public BlockDevice
     /** Get the value of storage when erased
      *
      *  If get_erase_value returns a non-negative byte value, the underlying
-     *  storage will be set to that value when erased, and storage containing
+     *  storage is set to that value when erased, and storage containing
      *  that value can be programmed without another erase.
      *
-     *  @return         The value of storage when erased, or -1 if the value of
-     *                  erased storage can't be relied on
+     *  @return         The value of storage when erased, or -1 if you can't
+     *                  rely on the value of erased storage
      */
     virtual int get_erase_value() const;
 
diff --git a/features/filesystem/bd/ProfilingBlockDevice.h b/features/filesystem/bd/ProfilingBlockDevice.h
@@ -125,11 +125,11 @@ class ProfilingBlockDevice : public BlockDevice
     /** Get the value of storage when erased
      *
      *  If get_erase_value returns a non-negative byte value, the underlying
-     *  storage will be set to that value when erased, and storage containing
-     *  that value can be programmed without another erase.
+     *  storage is set to that value when erased, and you can program storage
+     *  containing that value without another erase.
      *
-     *  @return         The value of storage when erased, or -1 if the value of
-     *                  erased storage can't be relied on
+     *  @return         The value of storage when erased, or -1 if you can't
+     *                  rely on the value of erased storage
      */
     virtual int get_erase_value() const;
 
diff --git a/features/filesystem/bd/ReadOnlyBlockDevice.h b/features/filesystem/bd/ReadOnlyBlockDevice.h
@@ -101,11 +101,11 @@ class ReadOnlyBlockDevice : public BlockDevice
     /** Get the value of storage when erased
      *
      *  If get_erase_value returns a non-negative byte value, the underlying
-     *  storage will be set to that value when erased, and storage containing
+     *  storage is set to that value when erased, and storage containing
      *  that value can be programmed without another erase.
      *
-     *  @return         The value of storage when erased, or -1 if the value of
-     *                  erased storage can't be relied on
+     *  @return         The value of storage when erased, or -1 if you can't
+     *                  rely on the value of erased storage
      */
     virtual int get_erase_value() const;
 
diff --git a/features/filesystem/bd/SlicingBlockDevice.h b/features/filesystem/bd/SlicingBlockDevice.h
@@ -131,11 +131,11 @@ class SlicingBlockDevice : public BlockDevice
     /** Get the value of storage when erased
      *
      *  If get_erase_value returns a non-negative byte value, the underlying
-     *  storage will be set to that value when erased, and storage containing
+     *  storage is set to that value when erased, and storage containing
      *  that value can be programmed without another erase.
      *
-     *  @return         The value of storage when erased, or -1 if the value of
-     *                  erased storage can't be relied on
+     *  @return         The value of storage when erased, or -1 if you can't
+     *                  rely on the value of erased storage
      */
     virtual int get_erase_value() const;
 

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`@@ -139,11 +139,11 @@ class BlockDevice`
`139`	`139`	`/** Get the value of storage when erased`
`140`	`140`	`*`
`141`	`141`	`* If get_erase_value returns a non-negative byte value, the underlying`
`142`		`- * storage will be set to that value when erased, and storage containing`
	`142`	`+ * storage is set to that value when erased, and storage containing`
`143`	`143`	`* that value can be programmed without another erase.`
`144`	`144`	`*`
`145`		`- * @return The value of storage when erased, or -1 if the value of`
`146`		`- * erased storage can't be relied on`
	`145`	`+ * @return The value of storage when erased, or -1 if you can't`
	`146`	`+ * rely on the value of erased storage`
`147`	`147`	`*/`
`148`	`148`	`virtual int get_erase_value() const`
`149`	`149`	`{`
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`@@ -139,11 +139,11 @@ class ChainingBlockDevice : public BlockDevice`
`139`	`139`	`/** Get the value of storage when erased`
`140`	`140`	`*`
`141`	`141`	`* If get_erase_value returns a non-negative byte value, the underlying`
`142`		`- * storage will be set to that value when erased, and storage containing`
	`142`	`+ * storage is set to that value when erased, and storage containing`
`143`	`143`	`* that value can be programmed without another erase.`
`144`	`144`	`*`
`145`		`- * @return The value of storage when erased, or -1 if the value of`
`146`		`- * erased storage can't be relied on`
	`145`	`+ * @return The value of storage when erased, or -1 if you can't`
	`146`	`+ * rely on the value of erased storage`
`147`	`147`	`*/`
`148`	`148`	`virtual int get_erase_value() const;`
`149`	`149`
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`@@ -122,11 +122,11 @@ class ExhaustibleBlockDevice : public BlockDevice`
`122`	`122`	`/** Get the value of storage when erased`
`123`	`123`	`*`
`124`	`124`	`* If get_erase_value returns a non-negative byte value, the underlying`
`125`		`- * storage will be set to that value when erased, and storage containing`
	`125`	`+ * storage is set to that value when erased, and storage containing`
`126`	`126`	`* that value can be programmed without another erase.`
`127`	`127`	`*`
`128`		`- * @return The value of storage when erased, or -1 if the value of`
`129`		`- * erased storage can't be relied on`
	`128`	`+ * @return The value of storage when erased, or -1 if you can't`
	`129`	`+ * rely on the value of erased storage`
`130`	`130`	`*/`
`131`	`131`	`virtual int get_erase_value() const;`
`132`	`132`
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`@@ -193,11 +193,11 @@ class MBRBlockDevice : public BlockDevice`
`193`	`193`	`/** Get the value of storage when erased`
`194`	`194`	`*`
`195`	`195`	`* If get_erase_value returns a non-negative byte value, the underlying`
`196`		`- * storage will be set to that value when erased, and storage containing`
	`196`	`+ * storage is set to that value when erased, and storage containing`
`197`	`197`	`* that value can be programmed without another erase.`
`198`	`198`	`*`
`199`		`- * @return The value of storage when erased, or -1 if the value of`
`200`		`- * erased storage can't be relied on`
	`199`	`+ * @return The value of storage when erased, or -1 if you can't`
	`200`	`+ * rely on the value of erased storage`
`201`	`201`	`*/`
`202`	`202`	`virtual int get_erase_value() const;`
`203`	`203`
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`@@ -108,11 +108,11 @@ class ObservingBlockDevice : public BlockDevice`
`108`	`108`	`/** Get the value of storage when erased`
`109`	`109`	`*`
`110`	`110`	`* If get_erase_value returns a non-negative byte value, the underlying`
`111`		`- * storage will be set to that value when erased, and storage containing`
	`111`	`+ * storage is set to that value when erased, and storage containing`
`112`	`112`	`* that value can be programmed without another erase.`
`113`	`113`	`*`
`114`		`- * @return The value of storage when erased, or -1 if the value of`
`115`		`- * erased storage can't be relied on`
	`114`	`+ * @return The value of storage when erased, or -1 if you can't`
	`115`	`+ * rely on the value of erased storage`
`116`	`116`	`*/`
`117`	`117`	`virtual int get_erase_value() const;`
`118`	`118`
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`@@ -101,11 +101,11 @@ class ReadOnlyBlockDevice : public BlockDevice`
`101`	`101`	`/** Get the value of storage when erased`
`102`	`102`	`*`
`103`	`103`	`* If get_erase_value returns a non-negative byte value, the underlying`
`104`		`- * storage will be set to that value when erased, and storage containing`
	`104`	`+ * storage is set to that value when erased, and storage containing`
`105`	`105`	`* that value can be programmed without another erase.`
`106`	`106`	`*`
`107`		`- * @return The value of storage when erased, or -1 if the value of`
`108`		`- * erased storage can't be relied on`
	`107`	`+ * @return The value of storage when erased, or -1 if you can't`
	`108`	`+ * rely on the value of erased storage`
`109`	`109`	`*/`
`110`	`110`	`virtual int get_erase_value() const;`
`111`	`111`
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`@@ -131,11 +131,11 @@ class SlicingBlockDevice : public BlockDevice`
`131`	`131`	`/** Get the value of storage when erased`
`132`	`132`	`*`
`133`	`133`	`* If get_erase_value returns a non-negative byte value, the underlying`
`134`		`- * storage will be set to that value when erased, and storage containing`
	`134`	`+ * storage is set to that value when erased, and storage containing`
`135`	`135`	`* that value can be programmed without another erase.`
`136`	`136`	`*`
`137`		`- * @return The value of storage when erased, or -1 if the value of`
`138`		`- * erased storage can't be relied on`
	`137`	`+ * @return The value of storage when erased, or -1 if you can't`
	`138`	`+ * rely on the value of erased storage`
`139`	`139`	`*/`
`140`	`140`	`virtual int get_erase_value() const;`
`141`	`141`