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 ## Expose public secure entry points to the secure box
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-So far, the code in the secure box cannot communicate to other boxes. To let other boxes call functions in our secure box you can define public secure entry points. These entry points can map to private functions within the context of a secure box, and the arguments and return values are automatically serialized using an RPC protocol to ensure no private memory can be leaked to external boxes.
+So far, the code in the secure box cannot communicate to other boxes. To let other boxes call functions in our secure box, you can define public secure entry points. These entry points can map to private functions within the context of a secure box, and an RPC protocol automatically serializes the arguments and return values to ensure no private memory can leak to external boxes.
 
-You can define a public secure entry point to retrieve the index value from the secure box. This index value is increased every time the `SW2` button is pressed.
+You can define a public secure entry point to retrieve the index value from the secure box. This index value increases every time you press the `SW2` button.
 
 ### Defining a secure entry point
 
-Create a new source file, `~/code/uvisor-example/source/secure_box.h`, where we will define the functions that can be called through RPC.
+Create a new source file, `~/code/uvisor-example/source/secure_box.h`, where you will define the functions that you can call through RPC.
 
 ```cpp
 /* ~/code/uvisor-example/source/secure_box.h */
@@ -333,7 +333,7 @@ UVISOR_EXTERN int (*secure_get_index)(void);
 
 ### Implementing a secure entry point
 
-Now that you have defined the secure entry point, you can map the entry point to a function running in the secure box. This is done through the `UVISOR_BOX_RPC_GATEWAY_SYNC` macro. Open `~/code/uvisor-example/source/secure_box.cpp`, and replace the line with `#define PRIVATE_BUTTON_BUFFER_COUNT 8` by:
+Now that you have defined the secure entry point, you can map the entry point to a function running in the secure box. You can do this through the `UVISOR_BOX_RPC_GATEWAY_SYNC` macro. Open `~/code/uvisor-example/source/secure_box.cpp`, and replace the line with `#define PRIVATE_BUTTON_BUFFER_COUNT 8` by:
 
 ```cpp
 /* ~/code/uvisor-example/source/secure_box.cpp */
@@ -389,15 +389,15 @@ static void private_button_main_thread(const void *)
 
 ### Calling the public secure entry point
 
-To call the public secure entry point from any other box, you can use the `secure_get_index` function. It will automatically do an RPC call into the secure box and serialize the return value. You can try this out from the main box. In `~/code/uvisor-example/source/main.cpp`, first include the header file for the secure box:
+To call the public secure entry point from any other box, you can use the `secure_get_index` function. It will automatically do an RPC call into the secure box and serialize the return value. You can try this from the main box. In `~/code/uvisor-example/source/main.cpp`, first include the header file for the secure box:
 
 ```cpp
 /* ~/code/uvisor-example/source/main.cpp */
 
 #include "secure-box.h"
 ```
 
-And then replace the `main` function with:
+Then replace the `main` function with:
 
 ```cpp
 /* ~/code/uvisor-example/source/main.cpp */
@@ -412,7 +412,7 @@ int main(void)
 }
 ```
 
-You can observe the secure index by opening a serial port connection to the device, with a baud rate of 9600. When you press the `SW2` button the index will be increased.
+You can observe the secure index by opening a serial port connection to the device with a baud rate of 9600. When you press the `SW2` button, the index will increase.
 
 ## The NVIC APIs