some changes for the landing page (wording)

Author: ashimokawa

templates/home.tmpl

@@ -22,10 +22,10 @@
 	<header>
 		<div class="header-row">
 			<div class="header-title">
-				<h2>Software development, but free!</h2>
+				<h2>Software Development, and Freedom!</h2>
 				<div>
 					<p>
-						Codeberg is a collaboration platform and Git hosting for free and open source software, content and projects.
+						Codeberg is a collaboration platform and Git hosting for Free and Open Source Software, content and projects.
 					</p>
 					<div class="header-social-links">
 						<a href="https://mastodon.technology/@codeberg">
@@ -70,22 +70,21 @@
 				<div>
 					<h3>NON-PROFIT</h3>
 					<p>
-						Codeberg is not run by a company, but is in the hands of its users – via the non-profit organization Codeberg
-						e.V. based in Berlin, Germany – feel free to join!
+						Codeberg is empowered by its users. Backed by the non-profit organization Codeberg
+						e.V., based in Berlin, Germany. Join and support our journey!
 					</p>
 				</div>
 				<div>
 					<h3>COMMUNITY</h3>
 					<p>
-						Codeberg.org will be more than just Git hosting for your projects: We are a community of like-mined Free Software and
-						Content Creators.
+						Codeberg.org will be more than just Git hosting for your projects. We are a community of like-minded Free Software and
+						content creators.
 					</p>
 				</div>
 				<div>
 					<h3>RESPECT</h3>
 					<p>
-						No tracking. Your data is not for sale. All services run on servers under our control. No dependencies on
-						external services. No third party cookies, no tracking. Hosted in the EU, we welcome the world.
+						Your data is not for sale. No third party cookies, no tracking. Hosted in the EU, we welcome the world.
 					</p>
 				</div>
 
@@ -128,18 +127,18 @@
 	</section>
 
 	<section id="home-section-support">
-		<h3>We rely on your support!<img src="{{AssetUrlPrefix}}/img/svg/codeberg-icon-hearts.svg"></h3>
+		<h3>We grow with your support!<img src="{{AssetUrlPrefix}}/img/svg/codeberg-icon-hearts.svg"></h3>
 		<div>
 			<a class="button" href="https://join.codeberg.org">
 				<svg viewBox="0 0 18 24">
 					<path fill="currentColor"
 								d="m9.3283 3c-2.9405 0-5.3079 2.3671-5.3079 5.3076 0 2.9405 2.3674 5.3079 5.3079 5.3079 2.9405 0 5.3076-2.3674 5.3076-5.3079 0-2.9405-2.3671-5.3076-5.3076-5.3076zm-4.811 10.1635a6.1285 6.1285 0 00-3.8346 5.6814v1.0061a1.1491 1.1491 0 001.149 1.149h14.446a1.0397 1.0397 0 001.0395-1.0395v-1.1155a6.1285 6.1285 0 00-3.3015-5.4344c-.8908 1.6743-2.6514 2.8096-4.6873 2.8096-2.1347 0-3.9669-1.2479-4.811-3.0566z"
 					/>
 				</svg>
-				Become a member
+				Join Codeberg e.V.
 			</a>
 			<p>
-				Codeberg is the Free Home for your project! Our independence is backed by the non-profit Codeberg e.V.
+				Codeberg is the free home for your project! Our independence is backed by the non-profit Codeberg e.V.
 				Your donations and contributions sustain our community. Consider joining Codeberg e.V. as a supporting or active member with full voting rights, and empower our mission!
 			</p>
 		</div>
@@ -151,11 +150,11 @@
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 					/>
 				</svg>
-				Fund our project
+				Support Codeberg.org
 			</a>
 			<p>
-				Free as in freedom, not free as in beer! Operating our systems and developing the software has its costs. Our developers
-				deeply value your optional donation to support our mission.
+				Free as in freedom, and free as in beer! Operating our systems and developing the software requires resources.
+				We deeply value your optional donation, supporting our mission.
 			</p>
 		</div>
 		<hr>
@@ -179,11 +178,11 @@
 						<rect width="9.4" height="3.2" x="4.8" y="22.5" rx="1.6" ry="1.6" />
 					</g>
 				</svg>
-				Develop Codeberg
+				Evolve Codeberg
 			</a>
 			<p>
-				Powered by Free Software! Get involved in the systems behind Codeberg and help improving your experience. We
-				are looking for contributions to our various projects and services.
+				Powered by Free Software! Get involved building and improving the systems enabling the Codeberg experience.
+				We are looking for contributions to our projects and services.
 			</p>
 		</div>
 	</section>