More review feedback

Author: eholk

docs/code-quality/c6059.md

@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 ---
 description: "Learn more about: Warning C6059"
 title: Warning C6059
-ms.date: 10/04/2022
+ms.date: 12/14/2023
 f1_keywords: ["C6059", "BAD_CONCATENATION", "__WARNING_BAD_CONCATENATION"]
 helpviewer_keywords: ["C6059"]
 ms.assetid: 343a4cd1-048a-4edf-bb4b-187097bb6093
@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@ void f( )
 
 This analysis detects when the target buffer size is passed unmodified into the length parameter of the string manipulation function. The analysis is also able to detect cases where after simple computations the buffer size is passed as the length parameter. This warning isn't given if some other value is passed as the length parameter, even if that value is incorrect.
 
-For example, let's consider the first example again. The following code generates warning C6059:
+Consider the following code, generates warning C6059:
 
 ```cpp
 #include <string.h>
@@ -100,7 +100,7 @@ void f( )
 }
 ```
 
-If we make a small change, changing the `MAX` argument to `strncat` to `MAX - 1`, the warning goes away, even though the length calculation is still incorrect.
+The warning goes away by changing the `MAX` argument to `strncat` to `MAX - 1`, even though the length calculation is still incorrect.
 
 ```cpp
 #include <string.h>