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Author: ghogen

docs/azure/how-to-sign-in-with-azure-subscription.md

@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ Visual Studio also gives you the opportunity to [create a new, free Azure accoun
 Visual Studio allows you to sign in with multiple accounts and it let's you work with Azure resources across multiple Azure subscriptions so no need to sign-out of one in order to sign-in with another!
 
 > [!NOTE]
-> For the Azure CLI users, be aware that the sign-in from the Azure CLI is separate from the sign-in used in Visual Studio, so even if you're signed in to Azure by using `az login` on the same machine where you're running Visual Studio, you still need to provide credentials within Visual Studio.
+> When using Azure CLI, be aware that the sign-in from the Azure CLI is separate from the sign-in used in Visual Studio, so even if you're signed in to Azure by using `az login` on the same machine where you're running Visual Studio, you still need to provide credentials within Visual Studio.
 
 ## To sign in to Azure from a dialog or wizard screen
 

docs/azure/vs-azure-tools-configuring-an-azure-project.md

@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ You can configure an Azure cloud service project, depending on your requirements
 
 1. Set **Treat warnings as errors** to **True** to make sure you cannot publish if there are package validation errors.
 
-1. Set **Use web project ports** to **True** to make sure that your web role uses the same port each time it starts locally in Internet Information Services (IIS) Express.
+1. Set **Use web project ports** to **True** to make sure that your web role uses the same port each time it starts locally in IIS Express.
 
 1. From the Visual Studio toolbar, select **Save**.
 

docs/azure/vs-azure-tools-emulator-express-debug-run.md

@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ When you create an Azure project, Emulator Express is automatically used. For ex
 
     ![Properties for an Azure cloud service project](./media/vs-azure-tools-emulator-express-debug-run/web-properties.png)
 
-1. Under **Local Development Server**, select **Use Internet Information Services (IIS) Express option**.
+1. Under **Local Development Server**, select **Use IIS Express option**.
 
 1. Under **Emulator**, select **Use Emulator Express**.
 

docs/azure/vs-key-vault-add-connected-service.md

@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ Affects the project file .NET references and NuGet package references.
 
 ### launchsettings.json changes for ASP.NET Core
 
-- Added the following environment variable entries to both the Internet Information Services (IIS) Express profile and the profile that matches your web project name:
+- Added the following environment variable entries to both the IIS Express profile and the profile that matches your web project name:
 
     ```json
       "environmentVariables": {