PRR fixes

Author: Chris Cho

docs/eloquent-models.txt

@@ -13,14 +13,14 @@ Eloquent Models
 
 Eloquent models are part of the Laravel Eloquent object-relational
 mapping (ORM) framework that enable you to work with a database by using
-model classes. The {+odm-short+} extends this framework to use similar
+model classes. {+odm-short+} extends this framework to use similar
 syntax to work with MongoDB as a database.
 
 This section contains guidance on how to use Eloquent models in
 {+odm-short+} to work with MongoDB in the following ways:
 
 - :ref:`laravel-schema-builder` shows how to manage indexes on your MongoDB
-  collections
+  collections by using Laravel migrations
 
 .. toctree::
 

docs/eloquent-models/schema-builder.txt

@@ -39,10 +39,10 @@ in {+odm-short+} and show examples of how to use them:
 
 .. note::
 
-   {+odm-short+} supports managing indexes and collection, but
+   {+odm-short+} supports managing indexes and collections, but
    excludes support for MongoDB JSON schemas for data validation. To learn
    more about JSON schema validation, see :manual:`Schema Validation </core/schema-validation/>`
-   in the MongoDB server manual.
+   in the {+server-docs-name+}.
 
 .. _laravel-eloquent-migrations:
 
@@ -131,12 +131,12 @@ Manage Indexes
 --------------
 
 MongoDB indexes are data structures that improve query efficiency by reducing
-the number of documents needed to retrieve query results. Indexes such as
-geospatial indexes extend how you can query the data.
+the number of documents needed to retrieve query results. Certain indexes, such
+as geospatial indexes, extend how you can query the data.
 
 To improve query performance by using an index, make sure the index covers
 the query.  To learn more about indexes and query optimization, see the
-following MongoDB server manual entries:
+following {+server-docs-name+} entries:
 
 - :manual:`Indexes </indexes>`
 - :manual:`Query Optimization </core/query-optimization/>`
@@ -194,8 +194,8 @@ Specify Index Options
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
 MongoDB index options determine how the indexes are used and stored.
-You can specify index options when calling an index creation method such
-as ``index()`` on a ``Blueprint`` instance.
+You can specify index options when calling an index creation method, such
+as ``index()``, on a ``Blueprint`` instance.
 
 The following migration code shows how to add a collation to an index as an
 index option. Click the :guilabel:`VIEW OUTPUT` button to see the indexes
@@ -236,7 +236,7 @@ field:
       ]
 
 To learn more about index options, see :manual:`Options for All Index Types </reference/method/db.collection.createIndex/#options-for-all-index-types>`
-in the MongoDB server manual.
+in the {+server-docs-name+}.
 
 Create Sparse, TTL, and Unique Indexes
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
@@ -256,7 +256,7 @@ method with a ``MongoDB\Laravel\Schema\Blueprint`` parameter. Call the
 appropriate helper method on the ``Blueprint`` instance and pass the
 index creation details.
 
-The following migration code shows how to create a sparse and TTL index
+The following migration code shows how to create a sparse and a TTL index
 by using the index helpers. Click the :guilabel:`VIEW OUTPUT` button to see
 the indexes created by running the migration, including the default index on
 the ``_id`` field:
@@ -317,7 +317,7 @@ field:
       ]
 
 To learn more about these indexes, see :manual:`Index Properties </core/indexes/index-properties/>`
-in the MongoDB server manual.
+in the {+server-docs-name+}.
 
 Create a Geospatial Index
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
@@ -360,7 +360,7 @@ default index on the ``_id`` field:
 
 To learn more about geospatial indexes, see
 :manual:`Geospatial Indexes </core/indexes/index-types/index-geospatial/>` in
-the MongoDB Server manual.
+the {+server-docs-name+}.
 
 Drop an Index
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~