f rephrase

Author: arik-so

lightning/src/chain/chainmonitor.rs

@@ -163,12 +163,11 @@ pub trait Persist<ChannelSigner: EcdsaChannelSigner> {
 	/// Archiving the data in a backup location (rather than deleting it fully) is useful for
 	/// hedging against data loss in case of unexpected failure.
 	///
-	/// Note that if a crash occurs during the archiving process, a state may emerge where the
-	/// monitor is copied to the archive path but isn't removed yet. In that scenario, the monitor
-	/// would still end up being loaded on startup pending successful archival completion.
-	/// Additionally, this scenario might see the monitor being written to the archive path twice,
-	/// which is why this method must be idempotent and be able to handle monitors already existing
-	/// in the archive directory.
+	/// Note that if a crash occurs during the archiving process, a state may emerge with the
+	/// archival operation only being partially complete. In that scenario, the monitor may still be
+	/// loaded on startup pending successful completion of the archive process. Additionally,
+	/// because the archive operation could be retried on restart, this method must be idempotent,
+	/// ensuring it can handle scenarios where the monitor already exists in the archive.
 	fn archive_persisted_channel(&self, channel_funding_outpoint: OutPoint);
 }