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Author: norareidy

source/fundamentals/crud/write-operations/bulk.txt

@@ -214,8 +214,8 @@ see the following API Documentation:
 Order of Execution
 ------------------
 
-The ``bulkWrite()`` method accepts an optional ``BulkWriteOptions`` as
-a second parameter to specify the execution of the bulk operations as
+The ``bulkWrite()`` method accepts an optional ``BulkWriteOptions`` as a
+second parameter to specify whether the execution of the bulk operations is
 ordered or unordered. 
 
 Ordered Execution
@@ -230,13 +230,13 @@ Example
 
 The following example performs these bulk operations:
 
-- An insert operation for a document where the ``name`` is ``"Zaynab Omar"`` and the
-  ``age`` is ``37``
-- A replace operation for a document where the ``_id`` is ``1`` with a new document
+- An operation that inserts a document with a ``name`` value of ``"Zaynab Omar"`` and an
+  ``age`` value of ``37``
+- An operation that replaces the document where the ``_id`` is ``1`` with a new document
   that contains the ``location`` field
-- An update operation for a document where the ``name`` is ``"Zaynab Omar"`` to change the ``name``
-  field to ``"Zaynab Hassan"``
-- A delete operation for all documents that have an ``age`` value greater than ``50``
+- An operation that updates the document with a ``name`` value of ``"Zaynab Omar"`` and
+  changes the ``name`` to ``"Zaynab Hassan"``
+- An operation that deletes all documents where the ``age`` value is greater than ``50``
 
 .. literalinclude:: /includes/fundamentals/code-snippets/BulkWrite.java
    :language: java
@@ -308,4 +308,5 @@ There are 6 different ``WriteModel`` documents: ``InsertOneModel``,
 There are two ways to execute the ``bulkWrite()`` method: 
 
 - Ordered, which performs the bulk operations in order until an error occurs, if any
-- Unordered, which performs all the bulk operations in any order and reports errors at the end, if any
+- Unordered, which performs all the bulk operations in any order and reports errors
+  at the end, if any