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Author: rachel-mack

source/data-formats/time-series.txt

@@ -94,9 +94,9 @@ Your output should look similar to the following:
 Query a Time Series Collection
 ------------------------------
 
-To query in a time series collection, use the same conventions as you
-would for :ref:`retrieving <java-fundamentals-retrieve-data>`
-and :ref:`aggregating data <java-aggregation>`.
+To query in a time series collection, use the same conventions that you use for
+:ref:`retrieving <java-fundamentals-retrieve-data>` and :ref:`aggregating data
+<java-aggregation>`.
 
 .. note:: Window Functions
 

source/usage-examples/updateOne.txt

@@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ We use the ``Updates`` builder, a factory class that contains static
 helper methods, to construct the update document. While you can pass an update
 document instead of using the builder, the builder provides type checking and
 simplified syntax. For more information about the ``Updates`` builder, see our 
-:ref:`guide on Updates <updates-builders>`.
+:ref:`guide about Updates <updates-builders>`.
 
 .. include:: /includes/connect-guide-note.rst