tech review

Author: lindseymoore

source/logging-monitoring/monitoring.txt

@@ -14,11 +14,11 @@ Overview
 In this guide, you can learn how to set up and configure **monitoring** in the
 {+driver-long+}.
 
-Monitoring is the process of getting information about the activities a
-running program performs for use in an application or an application performance
-management library.
+Monitoring involves collecting information about the activities of a running program,
+which you can use in your application or with an application performance management 
+library. 
 
-Monitoring your application lets you understand the driver's resource usage 
+Monitoring the {+driver-short+} lets you understand the driver's resource usage 
 and performance and can help you make informed
 decisions when designing and debugging your application.