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Author: lindseymoore

source/fundamentals/connection/tls.txt

@@ -77,13 +77,13 @@ in the following ways:
    see the :manual:`SRV Connection Format </reference/connection-string/#srv-connection-format>`
    section in the Server manual.
 
-.. note:: Workaround for the "unsafe legacy renegotiation disabled" error
+.. note:: Workaround for an "unsafe legacy renegotiation disabled" error
 
-   The {+driver-short+} depends on OpenSSL by default and can encounter "unsafe
-   legacy renegotiation disabled" errors when using OpenSSL versions 3.0 and later,
-   due to outdated SSL proxies. If you encounter this error, you can set the 
-   ``SSL_OP_LEGACY_SERVER_CONNECT`` option to resolve, as shown in the following 
-   example: 
+   The {+driver-short+} depends on OpenSSL by default. You may encounter an "unsafe
+   legacy renegotiation disabled" error in certain environments when using OpenSSL 
+   versions 3.0 and later, due to outdated SSL proxies. If you encounter this error, 
+   you can set the ``SSL_OP_LEGACY_SERVER_CONNECT`` option to resolve, as shown in 
+   the following example: 
 
    .. code-block:: js
       :emphasize-lines: 6