Fixes per Jeff

Author: kennethdyer

source/style-guide/style/version.txt

@@ -27,10 +27,10 @@ General Guidelines
 
 With the exception of release notes and changelogs, which serve as historical
 documents, avoid referencing product release versions that we no longer support.
-For examples, when a release of MongoDB Server reaches End of Life (EOL), 
+For example, when a release of MongoDB Server reaches End of Life (EOL), 
 remove references to that release.
 
-You can omit information about the following items:
+You can omit the following release-specific references:
 
 * Features introduced in an EOL release are outdated.
 
@@ -77,7 +77,6 @@ you can more easily find these references when the release reaches EOL:
      * |change|
      * |deprecated|
 
-
 * To refer to a version inline, include the product
   name before the version number, (for example, ``MongoDB 5.0``).  This ensures 
   that a search for version numbers correctly matches product and release.