DOCSP-23292 QE Feedback Updates - Part 1 (#1301)

* testing banner add

* implementing intro changes

* adding line break to qe note

* Changed technical preview to public preview

* emdash

* emdash

* fixed formatting

* wording

* changed warning to tip

* merge conflicts

* feedback

Author: jordan-smith721

snooty.toml

@@ -3,14 +3,15 @@ title = "MongoDB Manual"
 
 sharedinclude_root = "https://raw.githubusercontent.com/10gen/docs-shared/main/"
 
-intersphinx = [ "https://pymongo.readthedocs.io/en/stable/objects.inv",
-                "https://motor.readthedocs.io/en/stable/objects.inv",
-                "https://www.mongodb.com/docs/atlas/objects.inv",
-                "https://www.mongodb.com/docs/php-library/upcoming/objects.inv",
-                "https://www.mongodb.com/docs/compass/current/objects.inv",
-                "https://www.mongodb.com/docs/database-tools/objects.inv",
-                "https://www.mongodb.com/docs/mongodb-shell/objects.inv"
-               ]
+intersphinx = [
+    "https://pymongo.readthedocs.io/en/stable/objects.inv",
+    "https://motor.readthedocs.io/en/stable/objects.inv",
+    "https://www.mongodb.com/docs/atlas/objects.inv",
+    "https://www.mongodb.com/docs/php-library/upcoming/objects.inv",
+    "https://www.mongodb.com/docs/compass/current/objects.inv",
+    "https://www.mongodb.com/docs/database-tools/objects.inv",
+    "https://www.mongodb.com/docs/mongodb-shell/objects.inv",
+]
 
 # toc_landing_pages are pages that have pages nested beneath them
 # and **should** open when a user clicks on that page in the TOC
@@ -199,7 +200,7 @@ toc_landing_pages = [
    "/tutorial/manage-the-database-profiler",
    "/tutorial/query-documents",
    "/tutorial/remove-documents",
-   "/tutorial/update-documents"
+   "/tutorial/update-documents",
 ]
 
 [substitutions]
@@ -242,7 +243,7 @@ cmk-long = "Customer Master Key"
 cmk-abbr = ":abbr:`CMK ({+cmk-long+})`"
 dek-long = "Data Encryption Key"
 dek-abbr = ":abbr:`DEK ({+dek-long+})`"
-dek-abbr-no-hover= "DEK"
+dek-abbr-no-hover = "DEK"
 key-vault-long = "Key Vault collection"
 key-vault-long-title = "Key Vault Collection"
 java-driver-version = "4.6"
@@ -277,14 +278,26 @@ efm = "``encryptedFieldsMap``"
 targets = [
     "core/queryable-encryption.txt",
     "core/queryable-encryption/*.txt",
-    "core/queryable-encryption/*/*.txt"
+    "core/queryable-encryption/*/*.txt",
 ]
 
 variant = "danger"
 value = """
-    Queryable Encryption is in Technical Preview and available for \
-    evaluation purposes. Technical Preview is not recommended for \
-    production deployments as breaking changes may be introduced.
+    Queryable Encryption is in Public Preview and available for \
+    evaluation purposes. Public Preview is not recommended for \
+    production deployments as breaking changes may be introduced. \
+    To learn more about the Preview please see the \
+    `Queryable Encryption Preview <https://www.mongodb.com/blog/post/mongodb-releases-queryable-encryption-preview/>`__ \
+    blog post.
+    """
+
+[[banners]]
+targets = ["core/csfle.txt", "core/csfle/*.txt", "core/csfle/*/*.txt"]
+
+variant = "tip"
+value = """
+    The next-generation Queryable Encryption feature is now in Public Preview. \
+    To learn more about Queryable Encryption, see :ref:`qe-manual-feature-qe`.
     """
 
 [bundle]

source/core/queryable-encryption.txt

@@ -15,11 +15,24 @@
 Introduction
 ------------
 
-{+qe+} is a feature that enables you to encrypt data in your
-application before you send it over the network to MongoDB while still
-maintaining the ability to query the encrypted data. With {+qe+}
-enabled, no MongoDB-managed service has access to your data in an
-unencrypted form.
+{+qe+} gives you the ability to perform the following tasks: 
+
+- Encrypt sensitive data fields from the client-side.
+- Store sensitive data fields as fully randomized encrypted data on the database 
+  server-side. 
+- Run expressive queries on the encrypted data.
+
+These tasks are all completed without the server having knowledge of the data 
+it's processing.
+
+Sensitive data is encrypted throughout its lifecycle - in-transit, at-rest, in-use, 
+in logs, and backups - and only ever decrypted on the client-side, since only you 
+have access to the encryption keys.
+
+{+qe+} introduces an industry-first fast, searchable encryption 
+scheme developed by the pioneers in encrypted search. The feature supports equality 
+searches, with additional query types such as range, prefix, suffix, and substring 
+planned for future releases.
 
 You can set up {+qe+} using the following mechanisms: