(DOCSP-40413): Cleaned up remote mode introductory content.

Author: corryroot

source/tutorial/deploy-om-container-remote-mode.txt

@@ -17,23 +17,21 @@ Configure an |onprem| Resource to use Remote Mode
 In a default configuration, the {+mdbagent+}\'s and Backup Daemons
 access MongoDB installation archives over the Internet from |company|
 
-You can configure |onprem| to run in **Remote Mode** with the 
-|k8s-op-short| if the nodes in your |k8s| cluster don't have access to
-the Internet. The Backup Daemons and managed MongoDB resources download
-installation archives only from |onprem|, which proxies download
-requests to an HTTP endpoint on a local web server or S3-compatible 
-store deployed to your |k8s| cluster.
-
-This procedure covers deploying an Nginx HTTP server to your |k8s|
-cluster to host the MongoDB installation archives.
+You can configure |onprem| to run in **Remote Mode** so that the Backup 
+Daemons and managed MongoDB resources download installation archives 
+only from |onprem|, which proxies download requests to an HTTP endpoint 
+on a local web server or S3-compatible store deployed to your |k8s| 
+cluster.
 
 Prerequisites and Considerations
 --------------------------------
 
-:ref:`deploy-om-container`. The following procedure shows you how to 
-update your |onprem| |k8s| |k8s-obj| to enable Remote Mode.
+:ref:`deploy-om-container`.
 
 Procedure
 ---------
 
+The following procedure deploys an Nginx HTTP server to your |k8s| 
+cluster to host the MongoDB installation archives.
+
 .. include:: /includes/steps/deploy-k8s-opsmgr-remote-mode.rst