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(DOCSP-11399-patch): Fix reference to managed cloud (#70)
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source/style-guide/style/voice-and-tone.txt

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@@ -106,8 +106,10 @@ Consider the following best practices for voice and tone:
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building apps than managing databases.
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* - It's about them, not us, and promises a solution.
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- Offload the burden of managing the cloud to a team of experts.
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- The managed cloud difference, fueled by expertise...
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- Unlock the value of your data with a scalable, serverless data
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lake.
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- One of the benefits of Atlas Data Lake is that it's serverless
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and scalable.
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* - Be simple and direct.
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- Why MongoDB Atlas? Flexible and scalable document database.

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