DOCSP-33133 Be Ing Verbiage (#139)

* DOCSP-33133 Be Ing Verbiage

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Author: ianf-mongodb

source/code-generation/query-converter/convert-queries.txt

@@ -66,10 +66,10 @@ Steps
 
          .. tip:: 
 
-            You can rename or delete queries from your project 
-            by clicking the :icon-fa4:`ellipsis-h` 
-            button on the :guilabel:`SQL Query` pane and clicking the
-            :icon-fa5:`pencil-alt` or :icon-fa4:`trash` icon.
+            To rename or delete queries from your project, click the 
+            :icon-fa4:`ellipsis-h` button on the :guilabel:`SQL Query` 
+            pane and select the :icon-fa5:`pencil-alt` or 
+            :icon-fa4:`trash` icon.
 
       #. Click the :icon-fa5:`copy` icon to copy the MongoDB syntax 
          to your clipboard.

source/code-generation/query-converter/convert-stored-procedures.txt

@@ -74,9 +74,9 @@ Steps
 
          .. tip::
 
-            You can toggle stored procedures for conversion by clicking
-            the :icon-fa5:`check-square` icon next to a stored procedure's
-            name. All stored procedures are selected by default.
+            To toggle stored procedures for conversion, click 
+            the :icon-fa5:`check-square` icon next to the 
+            stored procedure's name.
 
       #. Click :guilabel:`Save`.
 

source/code-generation/query-converter/convert-triggers.txt

@@ -63,9 +63,11 @@ Steps
       #. Click the :icon-fa5:`chevron-right` icon next to
          :guilabel:`Triggers`.
 
-         You can toggle triggers for conversion by clicking
-         the :icon-fa5:`check-square` icon next to a trigger's
-         name. All triggers are selected by default.
+         .. tip::
+
+            To toggle a trigger for conversion, click the 
+            :icon-fa5:`check-square` icon next to the trigger's name.
+            All triggers are selected by default.
 
       #. Click :guilabel:`Save`.
 

source/getting-started/atlas-log-in.txt

@@ -72,9 +72,9 @@ Steps
       .. tip::
 
          You can also initiate the log in process from the 
-         :guilabel:`Code Generation` tab by clicking the 
-         :icon-lg:`LogIn` :guilabel:`Log in with Atlas` button on the 
-         :guilabel:`Query Converter` pane.
+         :guilabel:`Code Generation` tab. To start the login process, 
+         click the :icon-lg:`LogIn` :guilabel:`Log in with Atlas` 
+         button on the :guilabel:`Query Converter` pane.
 
    .. step:: Enter your Atlas account credentials
 

source/installation/install-on-a-local-machine/install-on-a-local-machine.txt

@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ Installation on a Local Machine
    :class: singlecol
 
 You can install Relational Migrator on a single machine. The single machine 
-installation provides a simplified installation process by using default settings.
+installation provides a simplified installation process and uses default settings.
 This installation method is a "local" install because Relational Migrator 
 cannot be externally accessed and is bound to a single IP and port. 
 

source/installation/install-on-an-unattended-server/windows-server-installation/windows-external-access.txt

@@ -12,8 +12,8 @@ Enable External Access to Relational Migrator on Windows
    :depth: 1
    :class: singlecol
 
-Enable external access to Relational Migrator on Windows. By enabling external 
-access, incoming connections are allowed on the same port as Relational Migrator. 
+To allow incoming connections on the same port as Relational Migrator, 
+enable external access with Windows Defender Firewall.
 
 Steps
 -----

source/jobs/prerequisites/sql-server.txt

@@ -99,7 +99,7 @@ job configurations.
             To enable CDC at the table level
             use the ``sys.sp_cdc_enable_table`` stored procedure. 
 
-            You can check the SQL Server CDC settings by examining the ``is_tracked_by_cdc`` 
+            You can check the SQL Server CDC settings when viewing the ``is_tracked_by_cdc`` 
             column in the `sys.tables catalog view <https://learn.microsoft.com/en-us/sql/relational-databases/system-catalog-views/sys-tables-transact-sql?view=sql-server-ver16>`__. 
             A value of ``1`` for ``is_tracked_by_cdc`` indicates the table 
             is enabled for change data capture.

source/mapping-rules/edit-rules.txt

@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ Steps
 
    - Change the collection name. 
    - Change field names.
-   - Include or exclude a field from your sync job by clicking the
+   - To include or exclude a field from your sync job, click the
      :icon-fa5:`check-square` icon next to the field name.
 
 #. Optionally, if you want to select a BSON type or set null handling 

source/mapping-rules/new-rules-from-relational.txt

@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ Steps
 
    - Change the collection name. 
    - Change field names.
-   - Include or exclude a field from your sync job by clicking the
+   - To include or exclude a field from your sync job, click the
      :icon-fa5:`check-square` icon next to the field name.
 
 #. Optionally, if you want to select a BSON type or set null handling