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docs/quick-start/download-and-install.txt

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composer global require laravel/installer
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When the installation completes, you should see the following output:
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When the installation completes, the command outputs the following message:
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laravel new {+quickstart-app-name+}
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composer require mongodb/laravel-mongodb:^{+package-version+}
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following line in the ``require`` object in your ``composer.json`` file:
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When the installation completes, verify that the ``composer.json`` file
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includes the following line in the ``require`` object:
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docs/quick-start/view-data.txt

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php artisan make:model Movie -cr
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output:
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- Replace the ``Illuminate\Database\Eloquent\Model`` import with ``MongoDB\Laravel\Eloquent\Model``
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- Specify ``mongodb`` in the ``$connection`` field
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Your ``Movie.php`` file should contain the following code:
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The edited ``Movie.php`` file contains the following code:
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php artisan make:view browse_movies
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php artisan serve
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The page shows a list of movies and details about each of them.
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docs/quick-start/write-data.txt

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the movie information that you submitted. It should appear at the top of
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the results.
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the movie information that you submitted. The inserted movie appears at
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.. include:: /includes/quick-start/troubleshoot.rst
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