Fix some PR feedback

Author: rylev

posts/2022-02-15-Rust-Survey-2021.md

@@ -18,11 +18,11 @@ Without further ado, let’s dive into the analysis!
 
 The Rust community continues to grow, with this survey having the largest number of complete survey responses (9354 respondents), exceeding last year's total by roughly 1500 responses.
 
-90% of respondents said that they use Rust for any purpose including learning (an all-time high!) with 5% stating they have in the past and 4% stating they have yet to use Rust.
+90% of respondents said that they use Rust for any purpose, while 5% stated they had used Rust at some point in the past but no longer do, and 4% stated they have yet to use Rust at all.
 
 The survey was offered in 10 languages with 78% filling out the survey in English followed by Chinese (6%), German (4%), and French (3%). Despite English being the language most respondents completed the survey in, respondents hailed from all around the world. The United States was the country with the largest representation at 24% followed by Germany (12%), China (7%), and the U.K. (6%). In total 113 different countries and territories were represented through this survey!
 
-English, however, is not the language of choice for all Rustaceans with nearly 7% preferring not to use English as a language for technical communication. An additional 23% of respondents prefer another language in addition to English. The most common prefered languages (besides English) follow where Rustaceans live: Chinese, German, and French being the top 3. Japanese, Chinese, and Russian speakers were the most likely to prefer not to use English for technical conversation.
+English, however, is not the language of choice for all Rustaceans with nearly 7% preferring not to use English as a language for technical communication. An additional 23% of respondents prefer another language in addition to English. The most commonly preferred languages (besides English) roughly follow where Rustaceans live with Chinese, German, and French being the top 3. However, Japanese, Chinese, and Russian speakers were the most likely to prefer not to use English at all for technical conversation.
 
 ## Using Rust