Update posts/2022-02-15-Rust-Survey-2021.md

Co-authored-by: Wesley Wiser <[email protected]>

Author: rylev

posts/2022-02-15-Rust-Survey-2021.md

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 ![Do you use Rust at work?](/images/2022-02-RustSurvey/rust-at-work.png)
 
-As for why respondents are using Rust at work, the top answer was that it allowed users "to build relatively correct and bug free software" with 96% of respondents agreeing with that statement. After correctness, performance (92%) was the next most popular choice. 89% of respondents agreed that they picked Rust at work because of Rust's much-discussed security properties. Perhaps surprisingly, 89% of respondents also chose Rust because their teams found it fun and enjoyable to program (though respondents did agree more strongly with their choice to pick Rust due to its security properties).
+Adopting Rust at work seems to follow a long but ultimately worthwhile path for a lot of Rustaceans. First, 83% of those who have adopted Rust at work found it to be "challenging". How much this is related to Rust itself versus general challenges with adopting a new programming language, however, is unclear. During adoption only 13% of respondents found the language was slowing their team down and 82% found that Rust helped their teams achieve their goals. 
 
-Adopting Rust at work seems to follow a challenging but ultimately worthwhile path for a lot of Rustaceans. First, 83% of those who have adopted Rust at work found it to be "challenging". How much this is related to Rust itself versus general challenges with adopting a new programming language, however, is unclear. During adoption only 13% of respondents found the language was slowing their team down; which contrasts with the 82% who found that Rust helped their teams achieve their goals.
+After adoption, the costs seem to be justified: only 1% of respondents did not find the challenge worth it while 79% said it definitely was. When asked if their teams were likely to use Rust again in the future, 90% agreed. Finally, of respondents using Rust at work, 89% of respondents said their teams found it fun and enjoyable to program.
 
-After adoption, the costs seem to be worth it: only 1% of respondents did not find the challenge worth it while 79% said it definitely was. When asked if their teams were likely to use Rust again in the future, 90% agreed.
+As for why respondents are using Rust at work, the top answer was that it allowed users "to build relatively correct and bug free software" with 96% of respondents agreeing with that statement. After correctness, performance (92%) was the next most popular choice. 89% of respondents agreed that they picked Rust at work because of Rust's much-discussed security properties. 
 
 ![Adopting Rust](/images/2022-02-RustSurvey/rust-adoption.png)