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src/doc/rustc/src/platform-support/armv7a-vex-v5.md

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Allows compiling user programs for the [VEX V5 Brain](https://www.vexrobotics.com/276-4810.html), a microcontroller for educational and competitive robotics.
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Rust support for this target is not affiliated with VEX Robotics or IFI, and is not derived from nor used with any official VEX SDK.
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Rust support for this target is not affiliated with VEX Robotics or IFI.
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## Target maintainers
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## Building the target
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Rust does not ship pre-compiled artifacts for this target. You can use `build-std` feature to build ELF binaries with `std` support.
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Rust does not ship pre-compiled artifacts for this target. You can use the `build-std` feature to build ELF binaries with `std` support.
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`.cargo/config.toml`:
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## Building Rust programs
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The recommended way to build artifacts that can be installed and run on V5 Brain is by using the [cargo-v5](https://github.com/vexide/cargo-v5) tool. This tool wraps the `cargo build` command by supplying arguments necessary to build the target, while also providing uploading functionality.
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The recommended way to build artifacts that run on V5 Brain is by using the [cargo-v5](https://github.com/vexide/cargo-v5) tool. This tool wraps the `cargo build` command by supplying arguments necessary to build the target, while also providing functionality for uploading over USB to a V5 Controller or Brain.
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To install the tool run:
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To install the tool, run:
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```sh
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Programs can also be directly uploaded to the brain over a USB connection after building:
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Programs can also be directly uploaded to the brain over a USB connection immediately after building:
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```sh
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cargo v5 upload --release
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## Testing
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Binaries built for this target can be run in an emulator (such as [vex-v5-qemu](https://github.com/vexide/vex-v5-qemu)), or uploaded to a device over a USB or bluetooth connection.
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Binaries built for this target can be run in an emulator (such as [vex-v5-qemu](https://github.com/vexide/vex-v5-qemu)), or uploaded to a physical device over a serial (USB) connection.
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The default Rust test runner is not supported.
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