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Co-authored-by: Eric Huss <[email protected]>

Author: cuviper

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@@ -85,10 +85,10 @@ Compatibility Notes
 - [The `rust-analysis` component from `rustup` now only contains a warning placeholder.](https://github.com/rust-lang/rust/pull/101841/) This was primarily intended for RLS, and the corresponding `-Zsave-analysis` flag has been removed from the compiler as well.
 - [Unaligned references to packed fields are now a hard error.](https://github.com/rust-lang/rust/pull/102513/) This has been a warning since 1.53, and denied by default with a future-compatibility warning since 1.62.
 - [Update the minimum external LLVM to 14.](https://github.com/rust-lang/rust/pull/107573/)
-- [Cargo now emits errors on invalid alphanumeric token for crates.io.](https://github.com/rust-lang/cargo/pull/11600/)
+- [Cargo now emits errors on invalid characters in a registry token.](https://github.com/rust-lang/cargo/pull/11600/)
 - [When `default-features` is set to false of a workspace dependency, and an inherited dependency of a member has `default-features = true`, Cargo will enable default features of that dependency.](https://github.com/rust-lang/cargo/pull/11409/)
-- [Cargo denies `CARGO_HOME` in the `[env]` configuration table. Cargo itself doesn't pick up this value, but recursive calls to cargo will.](https://github.com/rust-lang/cargo/pull/11644/)
-- [Debuginfo for build dependencies is now off if not explicit set. This is expected to boost the overall build time.](https://github.com/rust-lang/cargo/pull/11252/)
+- [Cargo denies `CARGO_HOME` in the `[env]` configuration table. Cargo itself doesn't pick up this value, but recursive calls to cargo would, which was not intended.](https://github.com/rust-lang/cargo/pull/11644/)
+- [Debuginfo for build dependencies is now off if not explicitly set. This is expected to improve the overall build time.](https://github.com/rust-lang/cargo/pull/11252/)
 
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