Make "draft status" boilerplate match that of the template. (I had made something up when I wrote this.)

Author: pnkfelix

src/vision/shiny_future/barbara_makes_a_wish.md

@@ -2,9 +2,9 @@
 
 ## 🚧 Warning: Draft status 🚧
 
-This is a draft "shiny future" story submitted as part of the brainstorming period. It is a speculative sketch of what life might be like in 2 to 3 years, if things go well.
+This is a draft "shiny future" story submitted as part of the brainstorming period. It is derived from what actual Rust users wish async Rust should be, and is meant to deal with some of the challenges that Async Rust programmers face today.
 
-If you would like to expand on this story, or adjust the answers to the FAQ, feel free to open a PR making edits (but keep in mind that, as they reflect peoples' dreams, shiny future stories [cannot be wrong], only unclear or over-ambitious). Alternatively, you may wish to [add your own shiny future story][htvsf]!
+If you would like to expand on this story, or adjust the answers to the FAQ, feel free to open a PR making edits (but keep in mind that, as peoples needs and desires for async Rust may differ greatly, shiny future stories [cannot be wrong]. At worst they are only useful for a small set of people or their problems might be better solved with alternative solutions). Alternatively, you may wish to [add your own shiny vision story][htvsq]!
 
 ## The story
 
@@ -160,7 +160,7 @@ At the very least, as mentioned among the "incremental steps", we will need a co
 [Grace]: ../characters/grace.md
 [Niklaus]: ../characters/niklaus.md
 [Barbara]: ../characters/barbara.md
-[htvsf]: ../how_to_vision/shiny_future.md
+[htvsq]: ../how_to_vision/shiny_future.md
 [projects]: ../projects.md
 [cannot be wrong]: ../how_to_vision/comment.md#comment-to-understand-or-improve-not-to-negate-or-dissuade
 [MonsterMesh]: ../projects/MonsterMesh.md