reframing the reference to the initial proposal

Author: heckj

Sources/PackageManagerDocs/Documentation.docc/IntroducingPackages.md

@@ -53,5 +53,5 @@ To complicate matters further, a dependency may specify version requirements, wh
 
 The role of the package manager is to automate the process of downloading and building all of the dependencies for a project, and minimize the coordination costs associated with code reuse.
 A good package manager should be designed from the start to minimize the risk of failing to resolve dependencies, and where this is not possible, to mitigate it and provide tooling so that the user can solve the scenario with a minimum of trouble.
-The <doc:PackageManagerCommunityProposal> contains our thoughts on how we intend to iterate with these hells in mind.
+The <doc:PackageManagerCommunityProposal> contains our thoughts on the original proposal for how the package manager handles dependency resolution issues.
 Read <doc:ExploreDependencies> for more information on how the package manager resolves and records dependencies.