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Author: norareidy

source/monitoring/cluster-monitoring.txt

@@ -38,9 +38,9 @@ Subscribe to Events
 You can access details about SDAM events by subscribing to them
 in your application. To subscribe to an event, define an Application
 Performance Monitoring (APM) callback function to handle each event
-type you want to subscribe to. Use a ``mongoc_apm_callbacks_t`` object
-to register the list of APM callbacks with a client using the
-``mongoc_client_set_apm_callbacks()`` function.
+type you want to subscribe to. Pass a ``mongoc_apm_callbacks_t`` object
+to the ``mongoc_client_set_apm_callbacks()`` function to register the
+list of APM callbacks with a client.
 
 This code monitors server opening events by performing the following
 actions:
@@ -66,15 +66,13 @@ messages that resemble the following:
 .. code-block:: none
    :copyable: false
 
-   Server opening on ac-rmuag0v-shard-00-00.gh0qg50.mongodb.net:27017
-   Server opening on ac-rmuag0v-shard-00-01.gh0qg50.mongodb.net:27017
-   Server opening on ac-rmuag0v-shard-00-02.gh0qg50.mongodb.net:27017
+   Server opening: <host>:<port number>
 
 Event Descriptions
 ------------------
 
 You can subscribe to SDAM events by defining the corresponding
-event callback function. The following table provides the name of
+APM callback function. The following table provides the name of
 each SDAM event, links to the type's API documentation, and describes
 when the event is published: