DOCSP-47042 Monitoring Edits #633
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Hi @stIncMale, thanks for reviewing! Can you please let me know the following:
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| Monitoring is the process of getting information about the activities a | ||
| running program performs for use in an application or an application performance | ||
| management library. |
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This wording seems awkward. In particular, I am not sure what it means to get "information ... for use in an application".
Possible reword, which may or may not capture the intended meaning:
Monitoring involves collecting information about the activities of a running program, which can be used to support application development or in an application performance management library.
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Thanks for the potential reword! What do you think about this:
Monitoring involves collecting information about the activities of a running program,
which you can use in your application or with an application performance management
library.
| Monitoring your application lets you understand the driver's resource usage | ||
| and performance and can help you make informed | ||
| decisions when designing and debugging your application. |
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I think the prior focus on the driver seemed clearer. None of the monitoring discussed is app-level, it is all driver level?
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| This guide shows how to use information about the activity of the driver in code. | ||
| If you would like to learn how to record events in the driver, | ||
| consider reading our :doc:`guide on logging </logging>`. | ||
| To learn how to record events in the driver, see the {+driver-short+}'s |
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Nice word reductions, these help clarity 👍
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