Minor phrasing

[shreypuranik]

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[javiereguiluz]

I agree that the original wording is not perfectly clear ... but the new proposed wording isn't much better to me. @OskarStark what do you think about this? Thanks.

[OskarStark]

I agree with Shrey and with you, what about:

- This article explains how to create and load those bundle services files.
+ This article explains how to create and load service files from the bundle directory structure.

[shreypuranik]

I really like this @OskarStark. Only minor suggestion from me would be:

• From your suggestion: This article explains how to create and load service files from the bundle directory structure.

• To: This article explains how to create and load service files using the bundle directory structure.

How is that? //cc @javiereguiluz

[javiereguiluz]

Yes, I like the new proposals. The latest from @shreypuranik sound better to me, but both are great. Thank you!

[shreypuranik]

Thanks @javiereguiluz .

@OskarStark are you happy for me to amend the PR with this re-phrasing?

[OskarStark]

@OskarStark are you happy for me to amend the PR with this re-phrasing?

Yes, thank you 👍

[shreypuranik]

Thanks @OskarStark @javiereguiluz . I have updated the Pull Request with the re-phrasing.

[wouterj]

Thanks a lot for improving the docs and your fast reactions! It's now merged into 4.2, and I'll take care of merging it into the newer versions from there.