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Thanks so much for this PR! I'm going to ask @steveklabnik for help guiding this to completion. |
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ありがとうございました! I'm sorry this took so long to review. Last week was a week-long Mozilla event, and so I didn't have time to look at my assigned PRs until today.
I myself have only basic Japanese, and in fact, one of the few sentences I remember is 「日本は難しいですね。」 ha! So, technically speaking, this PR looks good, but since I also can't review for idioms, let's see if we can't get more eyes on it first. Let's see if these people are interested: who have all contributed to the Japanese version of the book. I'll try tweeting about it during daytime hours in Japan as well. |
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残念。。。私も日本語は苦手です。I think it'd be better to have a Japanese person review this. I have a feeling that some of the katakana translations can be replaced with kanji (e.g. ドキュメンテーション), but I'm not 100% on that. |
In my experience, this is almost certainly the case with writing by those new to the language. I know it's true for me; I know very few kanji. |
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You might want to contact this project |
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I don't really know Japanese. But I could probably find someone who knows for help. |
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@nodakai ah, good idea, thanks! I thought there was at least one more translation project out there... i'll open an issue. |
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@steveklabnik asked us to review this PR, so I'll do. |
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In Japanese translation about technology document, I seem "他の言語" is more popular.
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I would agree. Taken literally, the existing translation means "foreign country language", as opposed to @saneyuki's suggestion, which means "another language". The latter makes much more sense from a coding standpoint.
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I fixed it, thank you very much for your suggestion.
| <h2><a href="/en-US/documentation.html">ドキュメンテーション</a></h2> | ||
| <h2><a href="/en-US/community.html">コミュニティ</a></h2> | ||
| <h2><a href="/en-US/downloads.html">ダウンロード</a></h2> | ||
| <h2><a href="/en-US/contribute.html">貢献</a></h2> |
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As Japanese, I feel "貢献" means a bit strictly word. I seem "開発に参加する" (participate in development) or "参加する" (participating) would be more friendly. But I have no confidence...
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I fixed it, thank you very much for your suggestion.
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"その他の形式のダウンロード" would be more suitable..
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| <h2>特集</h2> |
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| <div id="static-code">{% include example.rs.html %}</div> | ||
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| <a href="http://rustbyexample.com/">より多くの例</a> |
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"他の例" may be more naturally.
s/"他の例"/"その他の例"/
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I changed it to "実行する"
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Thanks
どうもありがとうございます。
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some of kanji is differ from Chinese letters.
误り -> 誤り
発见 -> 発見
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どうもありがとうございます。I fixed it.
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| <li>ゼロコスト抽象化</li> | ||
| <li>セマンティクスを移動する</li> |
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ムーブセマンティクス is more suitable.
FYI, We have a Translation Table
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If you feel difficult on translating the documents, I'll translate the rest of documents after this PR is merged |
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For your information, I have made a pull request for the repository to improve the translation. |
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| <b>Rust</b>は速度、安全性、並行性の3つのゴールにフォーカスしたシステムプログラミング言語です。 | ||
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| <b><a href="friends.html">Rustの友人</a></b> |
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I think "友人" (friends) sound a bit strange here since Rust is a programming language and it's not a human. I guess "ユーザー" (user) is better but the linked page contains a list of companies so it's still not good.
I recommend not to translate it into Japanese, just "Friends of Rust" is fine, I think.
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Has the original text been changed? It currently reads "See who's using Rust", and my Korean translation is more or less literal (probably something akin to "誰がRustを使っているかどうか調べてみてください" in Japanese).
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Has the original text been changed?
I'm not sure sorry. I just saw it on the web.
I think I would translate "See who's using Rust" into "Rustを使っている企業" but I'm not confident. 😅
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Oh. There's a PR to fix the text. https://github.com/3442853561/rust-www/pull/12/files
Accepted a number of new translation proposals
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Thank you all for your support. I have fixed all the errors that were pointed out. |
| <li>トレイト</li> | ||
| <li>パターンマッチング</li> | ||
| <li>型推論</li> | ||
| <li>最小限の実行時</li> |
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I think "実行時" here is not correct. I would call "runtime error" "実行時エラー", but if It's runtime which is something like engines or libraries, I would call it "ランタイム" (runtime).
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It's originally "minimal runtime", in which "runtime" does indeed mean "the runtime component", i.e. "ランタイム".
(僕も日本語勉強中です。よろしくお願いします。)
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| <b><a href="friends.html">Rustを使っている企業</a></b> |
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Umm. I suggested the translation but I think "Rustを採用している企業" sounds more polite and nicer 🙇
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Looks great. Unfortunately the index and install pages are out of date with the recent changes to master. I think that should probably be fixed before merging. |
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The latest translated version #662 |
日本語は私の母国語ではありません。私は中国の日本語の初心者です。私のブログで误りを発见すれば、ご提出お愿いいたします。ありがとうございました。よろしくお願いします。
I am a Japanese beginner, so the translation is just so so.(I am a Chinese who loves foreign culture.)Please point out the wrong place, Thanks.